DisneyFanatic13
08-25-2007, 12:50 PM
If TDL had a story line for their HM, then here's the story for it. It takes place in the 17th century.
There was this elegant mansion in a village called Karakura Village. And in that mansion was a king named Ichigo Kurosaki, and a prince named Kevin Pham(me!). And one thing that made them lived for all eternity that they were inmortal.
Ichigo had an appretice named Zach Hewitt. And he's also Kevin's friend. One day, Zack was on his way to the mansion when he heard his friends ploting on how to kill the prince. He went to them and asked them why they were doing it. And since he heard the plan, he was involved. If he didn't kill the prince, they will kill his family. And if he told the king, then they will kill him along with his family. Then they handed him the poision and walked away. He went to the mansion, thinking. He was the prince's best friend. If he told Ichigo, then they would kill him along with his family. The kept thinking about telling the king. He entered to the mansion. Ichigo told him that he was a few minutes early. So he went to hang out with Kevin. They were in the library and talked. Then Zach offered Kevin some wine. And then Zach went to the kicten to get some wine. He poured the poision into one of the cups. Then he started to cry a little. One drop of his tears fell into the cup. He stopped crying and went to the library. He gave him the cup with the poision. He drank it and felt something weird. Then Zach confessed what he did while crying. He asked for his forgivness. Kevin forgave him and died. Then Zach started hugging him and cried. Then he put him on the couch. He took his sword and stabbed himself in the heart. He dropped dead in front of Kevin and blood started to surround him. Ichigo walked to the library to get Zach. When he entered in, he saw Zach surrounded by a pool of blood and Kevin dead on the couch. He fell on his knees. He started crying and yelled. Then he got up and went to the attic. He got some rope, and hanged himself.
So what do you think? Feel free to ask me questions and give me some suggestions. And Zach Hewitt is a friend that I met at my new school.
When I said inmortal, they can't die. But when Kevin drank the wine with the poision, it had a tear of a best friend. And since it was with the poision, he would die. And when an inmortal person comited suicide, they will die.
I will post the art concepts later.
There was this elegant mansion in a village called Karakura Village. And in that mansion was a king named Ichigo Kurosaki, and a prince named Kevin Pham(me!). And one thing that made them lived for all eternity that they were inmortal.
Ichigo had an appretice named Zach Hewitt. And he's also Kevin's friend. One day, Zack was on his way to the mansion when he heard his friends ploting on how to kill the prince. He went to them and asked them why they were doing it. And since he heard the plan, he was involved. If he didn't kill the prince, they will kill his family. And if he told the king, then they will kill him along with his family. Then they handed him the poision and walked away. He went to the mansion, thinking. He was the prince's best friend. If he told Ichigo, then they would kill him along with his family. The kept thinking about telling the king. He entered to the mansion. Ichigo told him that he was a few minutes early. So he went to hang out with Kevin. They were in the library and talked. Then Zach offered Kevin some wine. And then Zach went to the kicten to get some wine. He poured the poision into one of the cups. Then he started to cry a little. One drop of his tears fell into the cup. He stopped crying and went to the library. He gave him the cup with the poision. He drank it and felt something weird. Then Zach confessed what he did while crying. He asked for his forgivness. Kevin forgave him and died. Then Zach started hugging him and cried. Then he put him on the couch. He took his sword and stabbed himself in the heart. He dropped dead in front of Kevin and blood started to surround him. Ichigo walked to the library to get Zach. When he entered in, he saw Zach surrounded by a pool of blood and Kevin dead on the couch. He fell on his knees. He started crying and yelled. Then he got up and went to the attic. He got some rope, and hanged himself.
So what do you think? Feel free to ask me questions and give me some suggestions. And Zach Hewitt is a friend that I met at my new school.
When I said inmortal, they can't die. But when Kevin drank the wine with the poision, it had a tear of a best friend. And since it was with the poision, he would die. And when an inmortal person comited suicide, they will die.
I will post the art concepts later.