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CostaFreak
05-29-2007, 02:50 PM
Yes, the Pirates of the Carribean trilogy is done, but there are still too many things needed to be answered. Too many things, to the point that there needs to be a new trilogy. Now, this new trilogy should come out 10 or 15 years from now to give people a break from PotC, and give time for Disney to come up with new and original things.

Here's my idea:

Pirates

Yes, this new trilogy will simply be called Pirates so even though it's a continuation, it's its own story, which takes place 20 years after Pirates of the Carribean.

Now, here's the story for the first movie:

Pirates

Scene 1:

It is the heat of battle. A dark ship lands on the shore of a sandy island. Men come out stampeding over to the near by villages, plundering, killing every person they see, and burning entire villages to the ground.

(A young man wakes up)

Man: (Gets out of bed, sweating and nervous. He opens the curtains of a window to determine what time it is. He walks downstairs and finds a maid cooking breakfast).

Maid: (Cooking) Well someone's finally up. The master is gonna be ticked when he still see's you just woke up like this...looking like you just risen from the dead.

Man: (Gets tea and puts it on the table) That depends on how much of a wreck I look like.

Maid: (Looks at the young man to see how much of a wreck he is) Uhh...forget when I said he would get ticked, he will kill you.

Man: Are you so sure.

Maid: I've been working here for a while, of course that will be the case. (Sets breakfast on the table) Your last meal is on me.

It's a busy day as it usually is in Williamsburg, barters selling items, traders of the East Indian Trade Company selling their goods as they usually do, and a man in a blue suit with a red cape walks in the middle of the street, walking towards the house he lives in.

Master: (Walks in) William! (Looks at Will, who is finishing his breakfast). Well, at least you weren't asleep until noon again. Get dressed, we have a long road ahead of us.

Will gets dressed, and they both head off on thier horses to the coast of Virginia, where a ceremony to graduate cadets from training into becoming soldiers was to take place.

Meanwhile, somewhere off the coast of an island, a dark figure walks into a shadowy room, and marks a few Xs on the wall from the blood on his hands, and then one large X at the end. He then washes his hands clean of the blood.

More soon!

Big Disney Fan
05-29-2007, 05:36 PM
Is this a script for a new movie you thought up, or a script for an attraction?

FantasmicFan89
05-29-2007, 06:08 PM
Not to be too negative or anything, but doesn't POTC take place during the mid-late 1800's? Im not too sure about that I'd have to see the first one again, but pirates were pretty much gone by the 1900's.

But I could be wrong.

Big Disney Fan
05-29-2007, 06:10 PM
Not to be too negative or anything, but doesn't POTC take place during the mid-late 1800's? Im not too sure about that I'd have to see the first one again, but pirates were pretty much gone by the 1900's.

But I could be wrong.

Maybe the era could somehow be revived.

CostaFreak
05-29-2007, 07:23 PM
The era is still the same (late 1700's, early 1800's). You may be confused now, but everything will be answered (the new trilogy takes place 20 years after PotC, if anyone missed that).

And yes, by trilogy I mean movie trilogy.

imagineer_me
05-30-2007, 09:46 AM
Looking good so far.... Ticked? It doesn't sound so 1700's-ish to me. ;)

Anyway, I like the idea. Is this 'Will' the Will that we know? Or a son or something?

sandmansg6
05-30-2007, 10:14 AM
I agree alot of unfinished idea were left in the movie, but I would rather see a prequel, learn the story behind the black pearl, the beginning history between Jack and dia. and also between jack and barbossa...

now that would be a story line

Big Disney Fan
05-30-2007, 11:04 AM
I agree alot of unfinished idea were left in the movie, but I would rather see a prequel, learn the story behind the black pearl, the beginning history between Jack and dia. and also between jack and barbossa...

now that would be a story line

What would you name the movie? How about POTC: Where Did It All Begin?

sandmansg6
05-30-2007, 11:17 AM
sounds good but maybe... Pirates, the betrayal begins.. lol

imagineer_me
05-30-2007, 11:18 AM
^ Nah. Sounds a little corny. I for on could not stand anymore pirates movies. It's just gonna be milking it for ALL it's worth. When that happens the storylines get kindof ridiculous.

Big Disney Fan
05-30-2007, 11:24 AM
^ Nah. Sounds a little corny. I for on could not stand anymore pirates movies. It's just gonna be milking it for ALL it's worth. When that happens the storylines get kindof ridiculous.

That's alright. I was being sarcastic anyway. I do agree that the Pirates series is going JUST a little up and overboard (no pun intended).

sounds good but maybe... Pirates, the betrayal begins.. lol

That sounds better, only get rid of "begins"; try "the betrayal on the sea".

imagineer_me
05-30-2007, 11:27 AM
^ Oh you were kidding! I was like umm...that's interesting. :D

sandmansg6
05-30-2007, 11:28 AM
Nice I like that

tiki
05-30-2007, 05:28 PM
POTC: At World's Start ;)

CostaFreak
05-30-2007, 06:56 PM
Alright, time to clear things up. First of all, read the entire 1st post to ease the confusion.

Now, the movies of the trilogy will be ordered like this: Pirates: A New Beginning, Pirates: The Dark Armada, and Pirates: The Seven Crystals.

Now, time to continue the script:

Pirates: A New Beginning

Scene 2:

It's late afternoon on the Virginian coast, and many people from far and wide have come for the ceremony and feast about to take place, in good fashion. The Master, who arrived hours earlier, is now mingling with some fellow colonels and generals. Will is with the others, preparing for the ceremony.

Master: (Talks to a general, who happens to have been his master in the past) Do you think I did good with him?

General: (Holding shampagne) He's here, so you must have. Why do you ask?

Master: Ever since I found this kid, I've been having doubts. The kid's of pirate blood for God sake, and I always thought that after this, he would go off and do the evils of his own kind. It's been a mental hell full doubt this entire time pretty much.

General: (Sips shampagne) Well, you have been training him for 10 years, and he's never learned to do these evils, so there is no need for doubt. (Sips shampagne again).

Master: I guess you're right. (Awkward pause)...You're not gonna tell anyone about the kid's bloodline, right?

General: (Sips shampagne) Of course not. As I said, the kid's no danger to us. (Once again, sips shampagne).

(A messenger calls)

Messenger: Master Charlomagne!

Master: (Walks over to the messenger) Yes?

Messenger: It's a letter, from Washington himself.

Master: (Takes letter) Washington? What does this guy want?

Messenger: Apparently it's something important.

Master: (Opens letter and reads it) A promotion?

Messenger: Well, congradulations...general.

Somewhere near by, a ship's sails slowly emerge from the horizon.


Ok, yea, I admit, this scene was a little boring, but trust me, the action will start to pick up in the next scene.

More soon!

imagineer_me
05-30-2007, 08:42 PM
Keep up the grreat work!

CostaFreak
05-31-2007, 02:08 PM
Time for another update:

Pirates: A New Beginning

Scene 3:

It is now sunset, and the ceremony is about to start. Yet, at the same time, a dark ship with a black aura lands a few miles away from the ceremony.

(The ceremony begins)

Host: This day, 200 cadets end their training with their masters, and enter a new era in their lives and our country. These brave men are now entering the best of the best, into the finest armada in the world. These men...(continues talking).

Will: (Talking to another cadet) When will his speech end?

Cadet: I don't know, but it's lasting forever.

Host: ...These are the elite, the finest. You men will go through everything possible to...(continues talking)

Will: Give me a gun now so I don't have to continue listening to this.

Cadet: Sorry, you're out of luck.

Will: Crap.

Nearby, mysterious figures are walking through the forests, towards their destination.

Host: I am now happy to congradulate all these newly become soldiers on their success into entering the armada.

(Drum roll)

Will: (As the drum roll occurs, Will catches the sight of a beautiful girl looking down from the balcony).

(21 gun salute starts)

General: Fire!

(Riflemen shoot)

General: Fire!

(Riflemen shoot again)

General: Fire!

The riflemen shoot once again, but an extra shot is heard, and one of the riflemen fall from the fort onto a few of the cadets.

(The crowd at the ceremony gets shocked)

Host: Wait! No need for panic! (Goes over to the general) What exactly is happening?

An entire wall of the fort is blown up, and people start running for their lives. An entire army of lifeless british soldiers floods into the ceremony. The host gets impaled with a sword, and many of the newly graduated cadets get killed.

Will: (Starts running for his life and sees his master being attacked) Master!

Master: (Screams to Will) Get the hell out, now! (Gets stabbed)

Will: (Picks up a sword and chops the head off the attacker) Master...are you alright?

Master: Sorry...not this time. Go...now.

Will: (Sees more attackers coming in) No, I'm not gonna leave you like this!

Master: (Coughs blood) I...Idiot. (Laughs silently, then dies)

Will then tries to run, but gets hit with the back of a gun, and gets nocked out cold into the ground.

More soon!

imagineer_me
05-31-2007, 04:02 PM
Will: Crap.

In the 1700's?

CostaFreak
05-31-2007, 04:12 PM
^That word's been around since the 1400's and has had the same meaning since the 1600's.

No seriously, if you look it up it should tell you.

Oh, and if you didn't know by now, the main character of the story is William Turner III (Will's son). Sorry to say, but Jack Sparrow won't make an apperance until Pirates:The Dark Armada, so this 1st movie of the series is Jack Sparrowless. The rest of them, Jack will play an important role, just not as much as Will does.